As a group we decided that the thing that people were most confused about was the ending where our main character, Kelsey, changed identity to ensure she didn't get caught for the bank robbery. Due to COVID-19 we couldn't re-film any of our footage, so instead we decided to add a subtitle towards the end of the film that should clarify any confusion about the identity change. Overall, I am proud of our end product and I think the film opener in its entirety makes a lot more sense now.
Friday, April 10, 2020
Friday, April 3, 2020
Peer Reviews
Summary: I think our group got a lot of really good feedback. Our classmates were really descriptive and didn't hold back, which is great because it gives us plenty of idea about what to work on. As for improvements, I think the two main things my group will do is change the music at the beginning and clarify the ending when Kelsey changes her personality. These were the two major comments we got about improvements so I think this will make our opener run a lot smoother. We should add subtitles or a voiceover to the ending to clear up any confusion about the personality change. Overall, I think the comments were positive, yet helpful for our group to improve our film opener.
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